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标  题: 英语写作交流第6篇
发信站: 水木社区 (Tue Jan 28 01:55:25 2020), 站内
  
The longest and worst Spring Festival ever
  
When the Wuhan Municipal Health Commission stated that 27 cases of a new type of coronavirus had been confirmed on December 31, no one took it seriously.  
As several of the patients had passed away, and two new cases of whom had never been Wuhan were diagnosed in Guangzhou later, experts began felling obliged to investigate.  
They soon discovered that this new type of virus which stemmed largely from a seafood wholesale market in Wuhan, can be easily transmitted from human to human through the air.  
The World Health Organization named it 2019-nCoV.  
In order to prevent the spread of the virus, the Wuhan municipal government has given an order that all of the citizens are not allowed to leave the city or even drive their own vehicles out on the streets during this special period.  
Even so, there are still 30 provinces in China and more than 10 countries abroad have been reported appearing such cases, while the pneumonia has claimed 106 victims by now.
This disease usually starts both with low fever and dry cough, and there’s no specific medicine to cure it yet.  
All the masks that are used to protect ourselves from infection have been nearly sold out.  
Most of the Chinese families have been confined to their houses during the Chinese New Year holidays, as all the unnecessary gatherings had been called off.  
What is more, the Chinese citizens were informed by the government on Monday that the holidays of Spring Festival will continue until next Monday, for the terrible situation still lasts.  
This is the longest and worst Spring Festival we have ever experienced.  
During which, doctors and nurses from various parts of the country have volunteered to come towards Wuhan to fight with this pneumonia disaster, which is a moving spectacle consists of all these brave warriors who against the virus.
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标  题: Re: 英语写作交流第6篇
发信站: 水木社区 (Wed Jan 29 03:22:40 2020), 站内
  
我觉得要写这个题材的话,先看一下这几天的新闻,都是现成的文章,比如
a new type of pneumonia其实新闻用a novel pneumonia,
had been discovered新闻用的词是outbreak
Wuhan Municipal Health Commission,后面你也会用Municipal,这里为什么就不对了。
  
market和marketplace的区别是marketplace是指小的市集,market是指大型或者相对专一类型的市场,比如stock market, wholesale market, super-market,flea market。因为你上篇写的是发生在town里的事情,所以对应的就是小市集比较符合意境,但这次你说的是武汉,人口和纽约相当的特大城市metropolis,而且那个已知就是个批发市场wholesale market,就不能用marketplace了。
marketplace的图片是这样的
https://cn.bing.com/images/search?q=marketplace&FORM=HDRSC2
  
  
建议先看个新闻报道,看完重写吧
  
【 在 McJohn (偷自行车的人) 的大作中提到: 】
: The longest and worst Spring Festival ever
: When the Wuhan City Health Commission stated that 27 cases of a new type of pneumonia had been discovered on December 31, no one took it seriously.  
: As several of the patients had passed away, and two new cases of whom had never been Wuhan before were found in the southern China in January, experts began felling obliged to investigate.  
: ...................
  
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发信人: McJohn (偷自行车的人), 信区: EnglishWorld
标  题: Re: 英语写作交流第6篇
发信站: 水木社区 (Wed Jan 29 11:46:41 2020), 站内
  
谢谢谢谢!
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: 我觉得要写这个题材的话,先看一下这几天的新闻,都是现成的文章,比如
: a new type of pneumonia其实新闻用a novel pneumonia,
: had been discovered新闻用的词是outbreak
: ...................
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发信人: Oriphia (骰魔), 信区: EnglishWorld
标  题: Re: 英语写作交流第6篇
发信站: 水木社区 (Wed Jan 29 11:47:38 2020), 站内
  
https://newseu.cgtn.com/news/2020-01-23/Wuhan-shuts-down-airport-railways-to-contain-spread-of-Coronavirus-NtqkCJC39C/index.html
  
https://news.cgtn.com/news/2020-01-17/China-reports-2nd-death-from-Wuhan-pneumonia-virus--NjTFM0vm0w/index.html
  
  
【 在 McJohn (偷自行车的人) 的大作中提到: 】
: The longest and worst Spring Festival ever
: When the Wuhan City Health Commission stated that 27 cases of a new type of pneumonia had been discovered on December 31, no one took it seriously.  
: As several of the patients had passed away, and two new cases of whom had never been Wuhan before were found in the southern China in January, experts began felling obliged to investigate.  
: ...................
  
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发信人: McJohn (偷自行车的人), 信区: EnglishWorld
标  题: Re: 英语写作交流第6篇
发信站: 水木社区 (Wed Jan 29 11:55:33 2020), 站内
  
thanks a lot, that's what I need
【 在 Oriphia 的大作中提到: 】
: https://newseu.cgtn.com/news/2020-01-23/Wuhan-shuts-down-airport-railways-to-contain-spread-of-Coronavirus-NtqkCJC39C/index.html
: https://news.cgtn.com/news/2020-01-17/China-reports-2nd-death-from-Wuhan-pneumonia-virus--NjTFM0vm0w/index.html
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